I won the 5 minute fiction contest this week. Thank you to those who voted. If you haven’t tried it yet, you should. It’s fun.
I’m working from my antique desk today instead of the
train. Tony Gilroy said that he now
writes from anywhere but in the early days he would always long to be at his
desk – but never could be. It’s good to
have a comfortable place but don’t let yourself get locked in. I’m fortunate that my work requires me to
write a lot in addition to the personal writing (like this blog) so I am often
in different places with a deadline to meet and pages to write. I think it is only through practice that we
can become comfortable anywhere.
I also put my pants on the other leg first at least once a
week just to fight the allure of routine.
To continue the theme of not following routine/everybody
else, I’d like to express my disappointment with “Frozen.” It broke sales records. My daughter thinks it the greatest movie
since “High School Musical” – should have been a clue, I suppose… -- and the
interwebz are going gaga over the smashing success of a girl-protagonist film.
I was ready to be blown away. I wasn’t.
There was nothing ground breaking in the animation so that didn’t carry
it. The music sounded just like every
Disney TV show currently on Netflix so while it might have seemed special on its
own (“Little Mermaid” and “Lion King”)
it now vanishes into the crowd. We were
left with just the story.
I’m all about strong protagonists and it doesn’t matter what
sex, race, or creed they are. A well
written protagonist is compelling to watch. The problem with Frozen was that it lacked
depth. The sisters were fine – except that
we didn’t know who to root for. It was
suspense and mystery, it was “Who is the main character here?” followed almost
immediately by, “Who is the villain?”
The pacing was also off.
Everything felt rushed – from the growing up of the girls to grand
finale. The stakes were raised but we
didn’t care. We hadn’t had time to
care. Then it was over. Wrapped up like a present under the Christmas
tree so neat and tidy that it must have been done by a machine. It was the most contrived, unsatisfying
ending of any Disney film I’ve ever seen.
And I’ve seen “The Rescuers Down Under.”
I know there is a huge fan base out there and I expect that
they are all too young to remember “Beauty and the Beast” or “Pinocchio” or “Alladin.”
Congratulations on winning the contest. Good for you!
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